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My Beautiful Boy.
Contributed by
CommasCanSeperate
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Thursday, 2nd June 2011 @ 03:33:50 PM in AEST
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As two spritely ears appear over the tarmac
Eyes follow and hooves create energy
The open fields beckon us
And finally we feel free.
A trot along some low ground
Just to check its not too soft
I can feel your sparkle within you
Youre ready to take off.
A small whinny of excitement
As you and I turn to face the magic
A small inclination a wink a word
And your straight off into gallop.
Full throttle down the heavenly field
You let out bucks of joy and glee
I laugh and I cant stop smiling
Because you and I, were free.
We are coming towards a hedge now
You shake your head for some direction
And we turn on a penny to the left
Before the hedgerow and us make connection.
I ease you back into a soft canter
And we smoothly glide along the hill brow
We would appear on top of the world
Nothing can stop us now.
You grudgingly come back to walk
And shake your head in dismay
A few small breaths and a snort
Your rearing to go again.
I hold you back I see something else
Whats that gleaming beyond the hills
Miles upon miles upon further miles
Of open grassy fields.
Trotting up the road now
You sense my exited downs and ups
And you snort happily and power on forward
To what lays before us.
No checking of the ground this time
You touch the grass and take off without a say
I feel safe, I feel happy, I feel as one
In your precious company.
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Re: My Beautiful Boy.
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by poeticjestix on
Thursday, 2nd June 2011 @ 10:45:59 PM AEST
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Re: My Beautiful Boy.
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by Tomboy on
Friday, 3rd June 2011 @ 01:36:52 PM AEST
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| You have transported us into a magical, wonderful and unexpectedly exhiliarating world. Great read!! |
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