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Jigsaw Pieces
Contributed by
thistle_and_fern
on
Saturday, 4th June 2011 @ 11:32:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I'm looking for the pieces
of my broken heart
They scattered all around the place
When it was torn apart.
Like puzzles in a jigsaw
I need all pieces here
So I will go on searching in
The sky, the earth , the air.
Each time I find another,
I slot it into place
by doing this exactly right
I fill a missing space.
Now there is just one problem
I'm missing one I feel
This one important puzzle piece
Will mean my heart will heal.
You hold that missing puzzle
The piece that fills the hurt
And to make this happen
I need to find you first.
And when we find each other
The pieces fill fit in
And we will feel completed
and our new life can begin.
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thistle_and_fern
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2011-06-04 11:32:51]
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Re: Jigsaw Pieces
(User Rating: 1 )
by Ambivalence on
Thursday, 9th June 2011 @ 10:22:48 PM AEST
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I like this, very simple yet honest & heartfelt.
I can definitely relate to your poem. Great write.
take care
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Re: Jigsaw Pieces
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 10th June 2011 @ 01:56:56 PM AEST
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Superb.......you've woven this into a great and hope filled piece of poetry.
With emotion like this how can that jigsaw remain incomplete?
........oh and by the way.......love the title!!
Steve |
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