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Contributed by
spike
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Sunday, 12th June 2011 @ 10:00:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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So many brilliant vistas,
the wonderous sights I've seen
but all my soul now hungers for,
the places in between
the memories and the moments,
beautiful and obscene
but lately all I'm pining for,
the spaces in between
I've read the books
and all the words
that tell me what it means,
but most of life lies hidden
on the pages in between
just to slip under the radar,
discover the lost seam
forget the things that stand and shout,
and relish the between.
Copyright ©
spike
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2011-06-12 22:00:41]
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Re: Spaces
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by spud on
Monday, 13th June 2011 @ 11:00:06 AM AEST
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Hi Spike
Yes - that would be nice. Wonder how many answers we would discover if we could remove
our blinkers at the right times?
Well said, my man.
Tommy
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Re: Spaces
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by Tomboy on
Monday, 13th June 2011 @ 12:48:39 PM AEST
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| Perfect poem in every way, five stars!! |
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Re: Spaces
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by emystar on
Monday, 13th June 2011 @ 04:51:30 PM AEST
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Very good, thought provoking write.
Awesome as always.
smiles, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Spaces
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by petulinka on
Tuesday, 14th June 2011 @ 07:40:20 AM AEST
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| yes its brilliant!:)..the verses all of it, really great!!:) |
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Re: Spaces
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 14th June 2011 @ 10:08:02 AM AEST
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I would love it. I enjoyed this write, you made me ponder each word and moment.
Michelle |
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Re: Spaces
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by Rasberry on
Friday, 17th June 2011 @ 12:10:44 AM AEST
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| Gud write! |
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Re: Spaces
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by ming on
Saturday, 8th October 2011 @ 07:28:45 PM AEST
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Because you long for the inbetween...I love this. I spend time there and see no rhymes. LOL! But I am known for much abstract. Still caught my eye.
ming |
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Re: Spaces
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th December 2011 @ 10:34:56 AM AEST
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Like the roads least traveled, the spaces "in between" are laden with treasures 'n' rewards most folks ignore or too busy to take or contemplate. It's nice knowin' ya as a close friend and readin' some of your posts. We should talk about such things more when ya visit instead of doin' all those memory makin' adventures! Well, maybe not. We've always got ypdc.
wabl
KenMoore
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