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One last clue
Contributed by
Flex4life13
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Tuesday, 14th June 2011 @ 11:02:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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The dawn may never arrive when I stop waiting for you.
Tell me why this feeling of urgency eats away at me.
Monster of a woman, lay your pain every layer through.
Until we may meet again, I hide in this symphony.
As poets, we throw words at the world,
who will throw something back at us
what we long for is not that of gold
but rather, a little love and trust.
As long as you still, find a way in fueling my heart
It won't be all that hard in feeling you.
Gently a breeze filters through my open arms
i know its you giving me one last clue.
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2011-06-14 11:02:00]
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Re: One last clue
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by potentialpoet96 on
Tuesday, 14th June 2011 @ 09:32:03 PM AEST
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| wow. this is great.......i like the emotion |
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Re: One last clue
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by FlintHunter on
Saturday, 24th September 2011 @ 09:41:21 AM AEST
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'One last clue' is almost classical. It is a smooth and gentle love poem. Your waiting is palpable -- may it not last long. Waiting usually implies that whatever we wait for WILL arrive. I hope such is your destiny -- and I think it is. I think the embedded quatrain:
'As poets, we throw words at the world,
who will throw something back at us
what we long for is not that of gold
but rather, a little love and trust.'
is the heart of this poem -- a gemstone of wording -- a glowing string of pearls. Rare jewels, they are. A shining verse. Thank you.
Contributed by Flex4life13 on Tuesday, June 14 2011 @ 11:02:00 AEST
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