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It Must Be a Nightmare
Contributed by
The_unknown
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Thursday, 16th June 2011 @ 10:57:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I've seen others fall to pieces
I've heard of other peoples crashes
And I have dreamt of my own break
Only dreamt...
I've mentally hit a wall and shattered
I've hurt myself before and I've crumbled a little
But life drags on and I picked myself up
I dream of the day I can't take it anymore
The day I really give in
The day I lose my grasp and no one can save me...
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The_unknown
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2011-06-16 10:57:16]
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Re: It Must Be a Nightmare
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by Tomboy on
Thursday, 16th June 2011 @ 11:59:45 AM AEST
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| Your poem is short and quite directly to the point. Very good read, five stars!! |
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Re: It Must Be a Nightmare
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by steppingstones on
Sunday, 21st August 2011 @ 12:40:10 AM AEST
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| This is the story of my life and I'm almost crying :') So short yet so powerful. |
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