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Tobias
Contributed by
gothchick
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Friday, 24th June 2011 @ 02:16:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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And these cigarettes i smoke,
I dont even enjoy.
But they remind me of a once better time.
When waking up didnt hurt..
And i never wondered if breathing is optional
I smoke throughout the night
Reminding myself of your lips pressed against mine
The taste of booze and nicotine and love and truth
Now i just taste the memory of that.
The thing about this
Is that i think (and hope) doing this will get you back
Whilst i know you dont see me do it..
You dont see me smoke
You dont think of me..
Cause its a Friday night..
So youre out with friends..
A group i used to consider myself in..
Im not invited to your life..
So i keep smoking till dawn..
Hoping..
Wondering if you ever think of me..
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2011-06-24 14:16:44]
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Re: Tobias
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by lonelyguy92 on
Friday, 24th June 2011 @ 04:46:41 PM AEST
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| love hurts..... =( |
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Re: Tobias
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by xnickix7 on
Friday, 24th June 2011 @ 08:50:24 PM AEST
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| This is a good release! Keep it up! |
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Re: Tobias
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by emystar on
Friday, 24th June 2011 @ 10:36:26 PM AEST
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Sad but great writing.
blessings,
emy |
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