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Decomposing Faith
Contributed by
xnickix7
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Friday, 24th June 2011 @ 08:57:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
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She looks in the mirror, what does she see?
Someone who's trapped, she wants to be free
Her eyes, a sad story they tell
A past that she had told "farewell"
At night she lays in bed and thinks
To mask the pain she often drinks
Prefers to be alone
For this tear must be sewn
Her bruises are unseen
So dirty can't get clean
The secret that she hides
These roller coaster rides
There's not much left
Victim to theft
The world watches her fall
Hand and knees she starts to crawl
She squints from the glare
No one seems to care
They walk past as though shes fine
Unaware of her decline
She puts on a show
This way they don't know
The truth behind that smile
Is a life not worthwhile
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xnickix7
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2011-06-24 20:57:44]
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Re: Decomposing Faith
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by emystar on
Friday, 24th June 2011 @ 10:15:00 PM AEST
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Really sad but great writing. You should be proud of your work.
Huggs, blessings,
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Re: Decomposing Faith
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 24th June 2011 @ 11:32:41 PM AEST
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| Nice write. If you need someone to talk to I'm here. :) |
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Re: Decomposing Faith
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by Zeberdee on
Sunday, 26th June 2011 @ 08:30:47 AM AEST
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| I found some parts better than others, but the last line made it come together to something which, contrary to the girl's life, is worthwhile :) |
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