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You
Contributed by
Ali
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Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 07:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The little things you do,
You make me smile,
You make me laugh,
The things you'll never know I do,
Long for you,
Cry over you,
The thing I wish that we could do,
Love each other,
Forever.
Copyright ©
Ali
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2003-04-28 19:35:00]
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Re: You
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by savannah on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 09:02:18 PM AEST
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| I loved it! It captures exactly what I'm feeling right now, and is very well written! |
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Re: You
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by Saira on
Friday, 25th July 2003 @ 01:04:01 PM AEST
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Short but exquisite. Well done!
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