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mea culpa
Contributed by
essential
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Sunday, 3rd July 2011 @ 03:05:55 AM in AEST
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How eays it is to change
I always wondered if I could
I always wondered if I should
Just stop acting so strange
Well I did and I pretended
To be something I'm not
The more approval that I got
The more my treson I extended
Your cheers they made me blind
And soon the mirror's reflection
Just showed me pure adaption
But not the stupor of my mind
The moments when I don't feel numb
They lessen by the hour
But then I know I am the coward
I always dreaded to become.
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Re: mea culpa
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by UNORTHODOX on
Sunday, 3rd July 2011 @ 08:58:34 AM AEST
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This passage is powerful, because it speaks on a powerful subject
there is not a day that goes by that we don't struggle to keep ourselves
the fact that you used the word coward to depict the losing
side of the struggle really capture's how many must feel
well done
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