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Desire To Be Desired.
Contributed by
CommasCanSeperate
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Tuesday, 5th July 2011 @ 09:11:50 AM in AEST
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SecretLove
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Maybe it is just me, selfish old me that has a desire to be desired and an addiction to being loved,wanted,needed and held whenever, wherever. I guess not everybody is like that. I guess some people don't care if they are not missed, not wanted but I care. So much that it hurts. I want to leave, be held goodbye, then be told: Don't leave, I will miss you and I do need you and I want you and love you and I just don't show it, or say it, but I do. I really do, I promise. -still being held, never being let go- I can dream, but this will never happen. <3
For everybody who feels like utter **** today. -jump in my boat, tomorrow can only get better I guess. x
Any ideas out there?
How to make you understand
How I feel
Who I am.
Particular people
I let in.
*Its hard, painful.
Your one of them.
A want to be wanted
A passion to be cherish
A desire to be needed
I guess its selfish.
A teardrop wishing to be caught
A hug given rather than stolen.
To be missed, sought after
To be the one thats chosen.
I can supply you with all this
For eternal and more
Yet, in return I wish for a two way street
So please, open the double doors.
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2011-07-05 09:11:50]
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Re: Desire To Be Desired.
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 5th July 2011 @ 04:06:32 PM AEST
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I'd say you have a great hand on what's going on.
I really luved the ending.
A great change from the norm to read.
Blessings, |
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Re: Desire To Be Desired.
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by Dirkj on
Wednesday, 6th July 2011 @ 03:09:56 AM AEST
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| i think most people have the need to be wanted , nice poem |
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Re: Desire To Be Desired.
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by ammar on
Thursday, 7th July 2011 @ 12:12:53 PM AEST
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You express your feelings well. Your sincerity strikes the reader.
Yes, we do desire to be wanted and desired. |
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