|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Controlling Confusion.
Contributed by
CommasCanSeperate
on
Wednesday, 6th July 2011 @ 11:53:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
|
Nights unsleepable
None like yesterday
The tears, the tiredness
The heartbreaking pain.
The blood wanted
And the eyes full of confusion
To why on earth
And what just happened
A silent whisper
The light again
Dont make it harder
Im trying to be sane
Again wanted
Somehow not left
The mind changer
At his best
God knows whats to lose
Heaven knows whats to keep
Maybe its only the unknown
Thats making us weep
The unfulfilled promises
The words taken to far
The actions speaking louder
We are both on a par
This is out of control confusion
To me, its on your side
I know what I want, you know me too well
I guess it the factor in what makes us cry
You dont know what you have
Until its away in a shadow
Until its not there anymore
And has disappeared fully.
Copyright ©
CommasCanSeperate
... [
2011-07-06 11:53:25]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Controlling Confusion.
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Wednesday, 6th July 2011 @ 03:30:22 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
So true.
You did a great job, here.
Blessings |
|
|
Re: Controlling Confusion.
(User Rating: 1 )
by longhaircg on
Thursday, 7th July 2011 @ 08:11:04 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
You put so much emotion into your words, I just cried, ty
SP |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Site Help
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
