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I just don't get it
Contributed by
poeticjestix
on
Wednesday, 6th July 2011 @ 03:11:58 PM in AEST
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I don't have what it takes
to take what you have
whatever it is
I just don't get it.
Trained for a world
that no longer exists
whatever it is
I just don't get it.
I read the eyes of the selected ones,
those presented in rectangular light.
They get it, you get them.
They are awarded
for they connect with you
or the person you think you are
and deep down
you forgive yourself
because you get it.
At least that is what you are told.
Meanwhile
time takes a little bit away
each and every single day
until the world you know..
The world you get.
Doesn't get it any more.
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poeticjestix
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2011-07-06 15:11:58]
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Re: I just don't get it
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by CommasCanSeperate on
Wednesday, 6th July 2011 @ 04:00:02 PM AEST
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| The feeling and grief of being misunderstood and *not got* is terrifying and saddening, really nice poem, summed up a lot of my feelings with the way i read it x |
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Re: I just don't get it
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by UNORTHODOX on
Thursday, 7th July 2011 @ 11:01:21 AM AEST
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A masterful conveyence of a message most won't get
and that many are oblivious to
while others just prefer that ever popular bliss as opposed to.
A profound piece to say the least
keenly witted and flawlessly executed
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Re: I just don't get it
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by ming on
Thursday, 7th July 2011 @ 12:53:02 PM AEST
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You DO get it! You run deep, as a poet should. Stand apart...grow. Loved this. :)
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