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fingers on keyboard
Contributed by
ming
on
Thursday, 7th July 2011 @ 09:02:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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maybe maybe maybe
a pause
perhaps less drastic
measures are in
order
everyone deserves
more time
than this bright
comet of a ghost
so what's in your
lexicon?
the sharp edges
scratch and form
all on their own.
Copyright ©
ming
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2011-07-07 09:02:18]
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Re: fingers on keyboard
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by UNORTHODOX on
Thursday, 7th July 2011 @ 10:34:05 AM AEST
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I really appreciate this kind of writting
a crafty melding of words, and ideas
art in it's purest form,
this passage has your, stamp all over it
and the message is startling in it's truth.
Well done
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Re: fingers on keyboard
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by Deidra_Carmichael on
Thursday, 7th July 2011 @ 05:18:04 PM AEST
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I like that you leave the main idea for the reader to take in on their own rather than literally putting it all out there. Keepnup the good work like this lovely work of poetry,
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