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lead the poet home
Contributed by
ming
on
Thursday, 7th July 2011 @ 09:32:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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worn thin enough to see
through
life-line kinked like
a broken promise
iron stone and dark
lend
to this
bit of
paper & ink
and I taste
secrets
of the twin
bastards
of life
fear and hurt.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2011-07-07 09:32:46]
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Re: lead the poet home
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by UNORTHODOX on
Thursday, 7th July 2011 @ 10:13:48 AM AEST
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It's always a pleasure to read your work:
to see the wheels of your mind churning,
in it's truly unique way.The end of the poem
(-I taste secrets of the twin bastards of life fear and hurt-)
was firece like decapitation, as it wasn't the least bit subtle,
and like your work couldn't be ignored
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Re: lead the poet home
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by northernlights on
Thursday, 7th July 2011 @ 10:22:02 AM AEST
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| very powerful write, provocative and highly descriptive, loved it |
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Re: lead the poet home
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by Deidra_Carmichael on
Thursday, 7th July 2011 @ 06:18:24 PM AEST
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Well well well Ming I am once again impressed with your work. Not to mention I admire your use of quotes from wonderful writers from the past; I adore the classics. Take care fellow poet,
Deidra |
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