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Seaside Memory.
Contributed by
CommasCanSeperate
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Friday, 8th July 2011 @ 12:44:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The seaside
Washing up upon the shore
Sitting neatly, what a view
I couldnt ask for more.
A beautiful young man
Sitting next to me
I trust him with my life
even though Ive known him only weeks.
He holds me so tightly
And I feel safe, I feel wanted
Each touch, word, look
I do not take for granted.
We can see everybody here
But it feels like its just him, and me
And the best thing about it is
That this beautiful creation agrees.
Embraced in a kiss, with his soft lips
It fires happiness to my core
Again, I just have everything
I couldnt ask for more.
Ive never felt this way, ever
its beyond happy, beyond all words
Maybe this is just what it feels like
To be truly in love.
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Re: Seaside Memory.
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by Deidra_Carmichael on
Friday, 8th July 2011 @ 01:16:16 PM AEST
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Aww how sweet! I know exactly how you feel and it is an ecstatic feeling like no other. You're poem just brought me to a wonderland filled with romance and perpetual happiness. Thank you for your sharing this amazing write and for using your creative talent for all to see,
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