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one small trip
Contributed by
poeticjestix
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Saturday, 9th July 2011 @ 02:17:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Straight line obsession
in a spherical, chaotic world
he starts to stumbles
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poeticjestix
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2011-07-09 14:17:22]
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Re: one small trip
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by deusdeira on
Tuesday, 12th July 2011 @ 01:41:58 AM AEST
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Re: one small trip
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by UNORTHODOX on
Friday, 15th July 2011 @ 03:52:13 PM AEST
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A genius passage
we all stumble from time to time
while we are so obsessed with the wrong things
clever, witty and depth ridden
and I loved the irony
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