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Body Count
Contributed by
unorthodox
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Saturday, 16th July 2011 @ 11:07:27 PM in AEST
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Morgues count the bodies
in the name of what you will
God's eye undeceived
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Re: Body Count
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by FlintHunter on
Wednesday, 14th September 2011 @ 03:55:23 PM AEST
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Almost an anti-haiku -- no flowers, no fish, no clouds, no moon. Very interesting; certainly, no matter the body count, God'e eye -- undeceived. A Godly and oddly wrought verse. Darkness perceived.
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Re: Body Count
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by ming on
Monday, 3rd October 2011 @ 12:13:59 PM AEST
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If I could rewrite and make it WIDER put Divine or UniVERSE instead of God! Just my thoughts...
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Re: Body Count
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by desire on
Saturday, 11th August 2012 @ 10:05:11 AM AEST
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Nothing is hidden from his eyes
He watchs as the ignorant fall
Blindly for their lies |
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