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finding god doesn't happen on a good day
Contributed by
poeticjestix
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Monday, 18th July 2011 @ 10:34:19 AM in AEST
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Lets go fundamental
Lets go fundamental
This worlds run out of credit
And we cant afford the rental
Lets go fundamental
Lets go fundamental
God dont need no credit card
Happy, clappy dental.
Sodom and Gomorrah
Can wait until tomorrow
comforting if you cannot
pay back what you have borrowed
so lets go fundamental
a faith is just essential
when all you had was ripped away
with a velvet glove so gentle.
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Re: finding god doesn't happen on a good day
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by Banjosandwitch on
Tuesday, 19th July 2011 @ 07:59:57 AM AEST
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Re: finding god doesn't happen on a good day
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Re: finding god doesn't happen on a good day
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by ming on
Tuesday, 19th July 2011 @ 09:26:10 AM AEST
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Honestly...I would revamp most of this, but this awesome line;
'when all you had was ripped away
with a velvet glove so gentle'
no offence meant. :)
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