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tastes like ashes
Contributed by
ming
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Tuesday, 19th July 2011 @ 09:43:39 AM in AEST
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is that a threat
promise
warning?
it is a phrase
no one swallow
no one breathe
do you want
to go out to eat?
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ming
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2011-07-19 09:43:39]
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Re: tastes like ashes
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by UNORTHODOX on
Tuesday, 19th July 2011 @ 01:18:46 PM AEST
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Yours is like Morse code, it takes time to understand
my mind is always racing to the sounding alarms
if ever there was an effective brain enhancing excercise
The Ming Therapy would be it
stirring choice of words, nicely done
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Re: tastes like ashes
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by poeticjestix on
Tuesday, 19th July 2011 @ 01:59:55 PM AEST
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probably, if the warning is related to carbon monoxide.
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