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A fledgling stirs
Contributed by
spud
on
Wednesday, 27th July 2011 @ 05:58:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
FamilyPoems
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Restraints are cast
he's free at last
to shuffle round the floor.
This wrecking ball
when on the crawl
strews debris door-to-door.
Not yet the walk
nor yet the talk
but bold in exploration.
Bright coloured shapes
and grand escapes
and gleeful excitation.
We love his style
his impish guile,
the babyspeak he's voicing.
If we say NO -
still has a go -
then scurries off, rejoicing.
And so to bed,
this sleepy head,
to find where dreamscapes are.
Though calm will shake
when he's awake,
we hail our rising star.
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spud
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2011-07-27 05:58:15]
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Re: A fledgling stirs
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 28th July 2011 @ 05:19:08 AM AEST
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Haha, sounds like a right little devil.
Just wait, you'll be encouraging him to walk and talk and then before you know it, you'll be asking him to sit down and shut up!! lol.
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Re: A fledgling stirs
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by northernlights on
Thursday, 28th July 2011 @ 06:17:44 AM AEST
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| Full of life, full on just the way it should be running his Granddad ragged and ready to be a lifetime of inspiration for more writing.Look forward to the next chapter and more cheeky escapades to bring a smile, more please x |
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Re: A fledgling stirs
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by Deidra_Carmichael on
Thursday, 28th July 2011 @ 07:20:04 PM AEST
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Aww how adorable! I hope all is well and may God bless your precious family,
Deidra |
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Re: A fledgling stirs
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by ming on
Monday, 1st August 2011 @ 11:04:53 AM AEST
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This was quaint...and it could even be about a patient in a madhouse. LOL! Yes, ming is wacked...
ming |
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Re: A fledgling stirs
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by Breezy on
Sunday, 7th August 2011 @ 07:05:21 AM AEST
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Brilliant as always, Tommy. How
I've missed your poetry. Hopefully
I'll be able to frequent your work
more often. ¦)
This is delightful, and means so much
more now that we have our own little
fledgling running about. ;)
Your email doesn't work BTW. Tried
sending you something recently and it
got kicked back. :(
keep in touch ~
~ B |
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Re: A fledgling stirs
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by myheartsvoice on
Monday, 8th August 2011 @ 08:38:50 AM AEST
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beautiful work u have here my friend,
i've read 2 of ur poems this 1 & the
eyes have it, u have the mark of a
true craftsmen with a well blended
portion of the heart and soul of an
artist, all neatly wrapt in the innocense
of a little boy's creative imagination
along with the skill to define and present
it so well, if that incompetence, i hope 2 c
more of it :)
ty 4 visiting my page Tommy
my♥svoice
Ben :) |
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