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Buried
Contributed by
Kat
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Saturday, 3rd August 2002 @ 02:42:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I walk around the ones that put me down, not making a sound.
Can you hear me cry?
My flame still burns, the lessons never learned.
I've worsened the turn, can't you hear me cry?
Pull me out of the hole I'm buried in, it feels like a sin to feel this way again.
Trust me, just once, I will not let you down.
I feel like a clown, this air still makes me drown.
Right now, I'm so high, but I don't know why.
I trusted my instinct, but it let me die.
My flame burned out, shrouding me with doubt.
I can not get out, and you just watch me die.
Stop this, can you please?
I am forcing myself, I'm begging on my knees.
I can't see, lost in my dreams.
I'm killing myself, still begging on my knees.
Copyright ©
Kat
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2002-08-03 14:42:18]
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Re: Buried
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by ginsdance on
Saturday, 3rd August 2002 @ 02:51:48 PM AEST
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I can hear you Kat! This is another very strong poem, and you can feel the anger and the heartache in it. Great write.... but sooo sooo sad...
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