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PSHYCOLOGICAL ROUSE
Contributed by
emystar
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Sunday, 31st July 2011 @ 09:13:20 PM in AEST
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You're right where I want,
Thinken you've beaten the fight.
Brag to your fair weather friends.
Have nite mares in all your nites.
Your psychological rouse
Is gonna bring you to yo knees.
Aah yo freedom will soon be gone,
So just keep thinken you gonna be
Free, You'll be crying asken
"God". please",
You gonna bring yo self down.
Your evil will soon be hell.
So ignorant and think you've won.
Yo destiny's gonna turn on your
spell.
You know I want back down
Or let these answers blow a way.
You dug your hole so deep.
You've made your own hell, Hey!
Hussein and bin laden Thought
They were beyond Earthly law.
Just like your Psychological rouse.
Are you ready? Evil will surely fall.
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emystar
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Re: PSHYCOLOGICAL ROUSE
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by Deidra_Carmichael on
Monday, 1st August 2011 @ 03:00:53 PM AEST
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I love the moral of this write for the illogical must keep themselves in check with God. May He inspire you in all you do,
Deidra |
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Re: PSHYCOLOGICAL ROUSE
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by deusdeira on
Thursday, 6th October 2011 @ 04:33:26 PM AEST
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| If only all immorality would fall... the world would be such a better place. Although sometimes ...it can be hard to tell what is immoral and what is not. |
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Re: PSHYCOLOGICAL ROUSE
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by AaroKeith on
Tuesday, 1st November 2011 @ 08:26:58 PM AEST
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| I really like your writing style, your words flow so well. This one has a powerful message that I really enjoy. |
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Re: PSHYCOLOGICAL ROUSE
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th December 2011 @ 01:46:04 PM AEST
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Good 'n' evil picks a fight
it's good that's gonna win.
Love squashes hate 'n' greed
'n' frowns on mortal sin.
What? This is s'posed to be a comment on yer poem. It is. The poem inspired my interpretation in a verse. Kudos - keep the faith.
wabl
Ken |
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Re: PSHYCOLOGICAL ROUSE
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by hungarianhaze2 on
Friday, 9th December 2011 @ 08:59:30 PM AEST
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| Grand! so absolute! |
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Re: PSHYCOLOGICAL ROUSE
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by ever1der on
Sunday, 8th January 2012 @ 02:35:38 AM AEST
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I had a time trying to figure out who this was about but I guess it doesn't matter ... it certainly applies to many.
Good job. |
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