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He Did It
Contributed by
Deidra_Carmichael
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Monday, 1st August 2011 @ 02:24:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I'm trying to find the best way to describe this feeling
Only because you need to understand with who I'm dealing
For I have been convicted of an amazing concept suddenly
A man has walked into my life and made it heavenly
Ah yes he did it- he made me fall in love
Whatever happened to that lingering sensation of loneliness
That has been obliterated by a new sense of closeness
All that I have come to know has been erased from my mind
All because I have met up with a gentleman in perfect time
I'll admit he did it- he made me fall in love
Now that I have affection to give it has been given back to me
His care and kindness is overflowing and showers me
I'm ever so grateful-will always be thankful- forevermore
For my beloved has bestowed upon me a love to explore
Now I have to admit- I must admit
He did it- he made me fall in love
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Deidra_Carmichael
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2011-08-01 14:24:04]
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Re: He Did It
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by ShambalaMoon on
Monday, 1st August 2011 @ 03:14:52 PM AEST
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Wonderful expression of one of the greatest human experiences...Right on, lady!
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Re: He Did It
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by cashfan1 on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2011 @ 02:05:17 AM AEST
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| Very, very well done. This an uplifting journey through your emotions and you express them so well. |
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Re: He Did It
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by DrcGaimer on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2011 @ 01:55:43 PM AEST
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| Well written. Ah!, to have to admit that you've fallen for that special someone. I can relate, scary and exciting at the same time. |
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Re: He Did It
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by brialuv on
Friday, 5th August 2011 @ 02:58:47 PM AEST
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| beautiful poem !..its such a lovely day when you can say your finally in love and your happy |
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Re: He Did It
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by FlintHunter on
Wednesday, 28th September 2011 @ 06:33:55 AM AEST
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'He Did It' is a marvelous and joyful and light-hearted and clear-sighted poem. The refrain, i.e., 'He did it -- he made me fall in love' is a great ending for each verse. This poem has song lyrics in it -- the refrain would make a great 'hook.' Wonderful writing.
FlintHunter
Contributed by Deidra_Carmichael on Monday, August 01 2011 @ 14:24:04 AEST
Topic: Love or Romantic Poetry
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