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laissez faire
Contributed by
poeticjestix
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Friday, 5th August 2011 @ 05:33:46 PM in AEST
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The fallen shall rise again
standing on themselves in desperation
no co-operation
hitting new lows, reaching nowhere
failing, by trying to achieve
when the only outcome is an impasse
but that simply won't do
so, on with the competition
for there must be a winner
and many losers
and the winner must rejoice
immediately before he hits the dirt
and so it starts again.
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2011-08-05 17:33:46]
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Re: laissez faire
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by Zeberdee on
Friday, 5th August 2011 @ 06:33:51 PM AEST
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| Nice read. Better suited for the political poetry category. I wish I could agree on your conclusions, nonetheless I can appreciate them. |
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Re: laissez faire
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by Deidra_Carmichael on
Saturday, 6th August 2011 @ 05:53:20 PM AEST
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I'll admit this reminds me of the typical competition. Life can be a contest as well when applied to the workforce, popularity in school, and-as zeberdee mentioned- politics. Thanks for posting and may the Lord guide you in Jesus' name,
Deidra |
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Re: laissez faire
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by emystar on
Sunday, 7th August 2011 @ 01:00:17 AM AEST
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Very thought provoking write.
Blessings,
emy |
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