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When will it end?
Contributed by
huwbeauty
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Tuesday, 9th August 2011 @ 06:37:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Pictures of *****,
Of wasted time,
Fixtures with witches,
Eroding my mind,
Tinctures and fixes,
Eternally kind,
Flawless are wishes,
Binding me blind,
Stillness that switches,
Cannot unwind,
Conscious that itches,
With you all the time.
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huwbeauty
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2011-08-09 06:37:13]
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Re: When will it end?
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by cashfan1 on
Wednesday, 10th August 2011 @ 02:30:26 AM AEST
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these two poems you've posted are certainly top draw in terms of composition. Sad though this is, it is so well constructed that the reader is drawn in to your world of pain and anguish. Love it. Keep them coming. |
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Re: When will it end?
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by emystar on
Thursday, 11th August 2011 @ 06:45:22 PM AEST
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Great writing as always.
blessings,
emy |
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