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I'm complicit.
Contributed by
huwbeauty
on
Tuesday, 9th August 2011 @ 06:42:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Im forced coarse,
Im complicit,
Ive your choice,
Thats written,
Accepted, renowned,
Intrinsic.
Was cursed first,
Im complicit,
With hoarse voice,
Thats given,
Accepted, too loud,
Instinctive.
Im hurt worst,
Im complicit,
The sure choice,
That isnt,
Accepted, this clown,
Invested.
Though clouds shroud,
Im complicit,
I know now,
The message,
Accepted, allowed,
Regretted,
Effected, cowed,
Indebted.
Copyright ©
huwbeauty
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2011-08-09 06:42:03]
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Re: I'm complicit.
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by cashfan1 on
Wednesday, 10th August 2011 @ 02:27:15 AM AEST
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Wow! This is serious writing. Very well put together and expertly expressed. Well done Mat,
this is amongst your very best work. |
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Re: I'm complicit.
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by emystar on
Thursday, 11th August 2011 @ 06:43:24 PM AEST
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Well done.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: I'm complicit.
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by northernlights on
Saturday, 13th August 2011 @ 10:39:10 AM AEST
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Very strong voice being heard here, and so is the feeling of the battle that is being fought as recognition of the true picture brings clarity but no
comfort. great write |
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