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Contributed by
duff
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Wednesday, 10th August 2011 @ 12:36:04 AM in AEST
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Im a dirty secret named Alice
Shes begging from her knees
Am I pretty when I look like this?
Clicking away Alice is used
Uncrossed and hot for the shot
Come with me this love is free
Thighs burn passion they learn
Shes so famous from all of us
Little sins with Alice again
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duff
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2011-08-10 00:36:04]
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Re: webcam
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by UNORTHODOX on
Wednesday, 10th August 2011 @ 06:19:09 AM AEST
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you've captured the essence, of the rot
which plagues us, and who is guiltless?
this is definitley a reminder, and strength to
seek purity in this dusty,immoral lot we know as existence,
hard lined, and truthful passage,well done
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Re: webcam
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by ming on
Thursday, 11th August 2011 @ 09:19:06 AM AEST
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Wow! This is powerful. I saw it all! If you can bring me along with your words...it"s a keeper.
ming |
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Re: webcam
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by emystar on
Thursday, 11th August 2011 @ 06:30:26 PM AEST
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Really great writing.
Blessings,
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Re: webcam
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by northernlights on
Saturday, 13th August 2011 @ 10:33:23 AM AEST
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| Hey my friend good to see something from you.Got a whole heap of mixed messages from this,strong disapproving ie dirty secret, Alice is used,insecurity reflected in her questioning or maybe the viewers questioning,seduction with burning thighs and come with me, reward..... shes so famous from all of us,familiarity... little sins with Alice again.I would say that the eyes behind the webcam are in conflict with the mind.love unpeeling the onion so much to feed the mind. |
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