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Journey to an unknown destination!!
Contributed by
vikki
on
Wednesday, 10th August 2011 @ 09:24:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Is the road made of tar or mud?
is the grass lush green or golden like
hay?
wonder if it is choked up with traffic so heavy!!!
or is it just
me alone in solitude?
is it lighted all the way?
or do I have to
carry the light
with me to expel the darkness away?
are there check
posts to check my past deeds?
or just I have to pass them and be free
?
will my spirit soar higher and higher?
or will it be trapped in my
soul forever?
am I required to be careful or carefree?
or can I be
THE real me?
is the rainbow as colorful as seen from here?
or it is
just a mirage to invite us there?
none of us know, how it will be
as
none came back to tell what it could be
because this is the last
journey,
to an unknown destination
all have to embark upon with
nothing
to take along.
This is the final destination
for me, you and
every one.
Copyright ©
vikki
... [
2011-08-10 09:24:34]
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Re: Journey to an unknown destination!!
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by emystar on
Thursday, 11th August 2011 @ 06:09:47 PM AEST
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Great writing.
Very creative.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: Journey to an unknown destination!!
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by spud on
Friday, 12th August 2011 @ 06:33:27 AM AEST
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Who knows, Vikki. All I would say is make the
best of this world for yourself and those who
share your life - and if your happy with your
efforts then you'll be one of the first in the
queue ............... if there is a queue(?)
Well written with a few questions to ponder.
Tommy
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Re: Journey to an unknown destination!!
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by mvvenkataraman on
Monday, 15th August 2011 @ 08:19:36 AM AEST
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Dear respected vikki,
I enjoyed this piece very much
A different style of thinking
I am educated by this poem
Accept my admiring wishes.
Thanking you, Yours truly,
mvvenkataraman |
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