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The tooth faerie cometh
Contributed by
spud
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Thursday, 11th August 2011 @ 12:44:57 PM in AEST
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First tooth is through for you-know-who.
Big gnasher for the grinner.
An extra sparkle to his smile
and T-bone steak for dinner.
Well maybe not - that needs a lot
but a single tooth gets lonely.
Till its fellow molars make the cut
he'll munch on mish-mash only.
He sits and waits and spies our plates,
pretends his ration's drab.
Behind those lamblike big brown eyes
he's planning smash and grab.
Too soon he'll crunch a Sunday lunch,
too soon a toddler be.
Too soon he'll flash those pearly whites
...... and show more teeth than me.
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spud
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2011-08-11 12:44:57]
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Re: The tooth faerie cometh
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by emystar on
Thursday, 11th August 2011 @ 06:03:30 PM AEST
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That's really cute friend.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: The tooth faerie cometh
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by cashfan1 on
Saturday, 13th August 2011 @ 09:48:12 AM AEST
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Nice one Tommy! It's got me smiling. Take care,
Dennis. |
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Re: The tooth faerie cometh
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by northernlights on
Saturday, 13th August 2011 @ 10:18:55 AM AEST
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The toof the whole toof and nothing but the toof, awww got us all smiling. Great description....... behind those lamb like big brown eyes.......
worded with warm loving affection for a much loved grandson x |
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Re: The tooth faerie cometh
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by ming on
Saturday, 13th August 2011 @ 07:05:53 PM AEST
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This is more than a poem...it is love. Great one!
ming |
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Re: The tooth faerie cometh
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by Tracy on
Thursday, 19th January 2012 @ 08:36:24 AM AEST
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Good thing I have a Scottish background or I would not get some of your wording. LOL I just can't believe how great you are at the whole rhyming, rhythm, meaning AND comedy! Geez.
(standing ovation here) |
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Re: The tooth faerie cometh
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th February 2012 @ 03:14:24 PM AEST
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Ah, the cycle of life and love as they sure do grow up fast. Definitely brought a smile to this ol' face.
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Re: The tooth faerie cometh
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 14th November 2014 @ 01:38:47 PM AEST
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ha! sooo adorable! beautifully brilliant images,
hugs n' love nessa |
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