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Rasbora
Contributed by
boobies
on
Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 09:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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i'm telling you
i'm weeping for you
when i see you like
the others with their
tiny bones
hidden in the shadows
ashamed of your home
and the salt water between us
you fear as i fear
unlike Ms Hyphessobrycon innesi
she has some pride
above all
and we fall
like Babylon
and start praying
like sinners
as the tides come and
go and
wash your far away
from me
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2003-04-29 09:05:00]
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Re: Rasbora
(User Rating: 1 )
by Cakes on
Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 11:23:34 AM AEST
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| I like the flow of this, and I enjoyed the fish reference. Good stuff. |
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