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eye on the clock
Contributed by
ming
on
Wednesday, 17th August 2011 @ 09:07:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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intangible evidence
absence
as
evidence
evidence of absence
the
world's
woes
can I sell
tomorrow
and live
forever
in
this
second
while wrestling
the concept
of a billion
years
sinking
in
time
itself
fluid
and unpredictable
sometimes
profound
a
long
day.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2011-08-17 09:07:41]
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Re: eye on the clock
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by Brasco on
Wednesday, 17th August 2011 @ 10:21:48 AM AEST
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| well done, placed me deep in thought |
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Re: eye on the clock
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th August 2011 @ 07:25:48 PM AEST
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Sometimes time seems extraneous. Interesting concept. Thanks for posting.  |
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Re: eye on the clock
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by UNORTHODOX on
Thursday, 18th August 2011 @ 07:09:24 AM AEST
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Time is surely a topic of interest
so fascinating in that,it is intangible
yet we are always try to grasp it's concept,
as for the write truly blew me back
the depth and integrity are astounding
such a passionate passage, more than my words can convey
well written!
-UNORTHODOX |
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Re: eye on the clock
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by FlintHunter on
Monday, 12th September 2011 @ 07:28:05 AM AEST
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eye on the clock
Contributed by ming on Wednesday, August 17 2011 @ 09:07:41 AEST
Topic: Abstract Poetry
We are not amused; we wait for you with traps so as to catch you in the writing of just one wrong poem. But we find no such verse: certainly Chance itself will give us the chance of a long day to shoebox our sweet ming doing a word-while wile... Not to worry. We can wait.
Love, flinthunter
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