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Alone
Contributed by
Bigj
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Thursday, 18th August 2011 @ 10:04:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Selfish and controlling
These flaws run deep
My loss is great
The decline is steep
The realization of my claim,
To see it from afar
Has gripped me tight
Like the night around the stars.
The people I have hurt
The manipulation used
Has turned to life
Within tortured and confused
In the end it's all clear
I'm sorrowfully alone
Silence deafening the night
Reaping what was sown.
Written by: Justin Ford
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Bigj
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2011-08-18 22:04:37]
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Re: Alone
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by poeticjestix on
Friday, 19th August 2011 @ 02:22:07 PM AEST
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Well put. I know what it is to mess up and then reflect on what an Idiot I was, even though I was right at the time.
It isn't the end until the end even if it feels like the end. |
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Re: Alone
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by houseofleaves on
Saturday, 20th August 2011 @ 02:27:30 AM AEST
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| great piece, i can relate to this very much. |
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Re: Alone
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by Jigget on
Wednesday, 3rd April 2013 @ 03:24:01 AM AEST
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| gripped tight like the night around the stars is right...on!! too many poets shy away from rhyme, but i tell you, it has TAKEN ME PLACES i never expected. i've often said i'm a slave to the rhyme, in love with rhythm. so i applaud your choice to rhyme. i also felt the moment. strange how love lost can, as inspiration, closely follows addiction. short, deep, and rhythmic...just like me! |
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