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longing. . .
Contributed by
elle
on
Sunday, 21st August 2011 @ 08:40:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
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forgetting. . .
suspended by a thread. . .
peeling inside
this surreal year
our blue skies
stained &
crackled now
& inside its shell
I can hear
thunderous
clouds breaking
into pieces of lost time
how far away
it all seems
the touch, the smiles
words floating ever farther
out to sea
a beach of empitness
forever
empty of these. . .
ghostly sounds of lost hope
fleeing. . .
Copyright ©
elle
... [
2011-08-21 08:40:03]
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Re: longing. . .
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by Spike on
Sunday, 21st August 2011 @ 10:13:30 AM AEST
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powerful and beautiful longing, elle, hopefully a page slowly turning to another chapter.
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Re: longing. . .
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by poeticjestix on
Sunday, 21st August 2011 @ 11:15:50 AM AEST
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Wow! I genuinely felt butterflies reading this. Happiness hanging by a thread, but deserted- dead.
Depressingly brilliant for me |
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Re: longing. . .
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by ming on
Sunday, 21st August 2011 @ 07:17:38 PM AEST
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This line I want to steal,
"thunderous
clouds breaking
into pieces of lost time"
I felt sorrow and longing, and to feel when reading art is what it's about. Good one elle!
ming
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Re: longing. . .
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd August 2011 @ 10:36:59 AM AEST
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| Similar to what I have been feeling. Your poetry...always great. |
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