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strange little gift. . .
Contributed by
elle
on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2011 @ 11:17:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
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strange little gift. . .
it was among the fray
worn. . .
tablet, surrounded by moss & stone
&
the distinct smell of tragic abandonment
where are those lovely fingertips
that played away callous conclusions
like sudden melody
with torn contemplation
& pebbles for adornment
the firmament sealing mystery
somewhere high above
the context nothing short of tenderness
& dear
& while the wind blows breezes throughout the world
. . . it shifts
& fluttering pages
hold. . .
Copyright ©
elle
... [
2011-08-23 11:17:05]
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Re: strange little gift. . .
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2011 @ 09:42:30 PM AEST
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I will not pretend to know what this is about but I will sincerely say I still love it. Have read it several times throughout today and have enjoyed it each time. Please keep writing as it inspires me. Thank you very much.
Holding...
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Re: strange little gift. . .
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by ming on
Monday, 29th August 2011 @ 09:25:27 AM AEST
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Wow, wow, wow! This whole large block of words floored me!
the distinct smell of tragic abandonment
where are those lovely fingertips
that played away callous conclusions
like sudden melody
with torn contemplation
& pebbles for adornment
the firmament sealing mystery
I want to steal them... ;)
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