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A PAST UNFOLD
Contributed by
angelabella
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Thursday, 25th August 2011 @ 04:54:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Calloused fingertips on the strings
Played music within her heart
Unshed teardrops in her blue eyes
Whilst raindrops on a windowpane
Voices everywhere around her
Listening to nothing but a heartbeat
Thoughts not on the present
But on a face from dreamland
Unfamiliar yet known
Fading but has always been there
Within the depths of mind
Within the corner of her heart
A past unfold on the gray morn
Soon to fade...shielded with whirling thoughts
Yet to unfold again on another gray morn
Copyright ©
angelabella
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2011-08-25 04:54:23]
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Re: A PAST UNFOLD
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Thursday, 25th August 2011 @ 05:09:52 AM AEST
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+Great writing.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: A PAST UNFOLD
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by ammar on
Saturday, 10th September 2011 @ 12:55:59 PM AEST
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A great write. The comparison between the tears and the raindrops is a superb one, and it really engages the reader into your poem.
Keep writing
Peace
Ammar |
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