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A Funeral for my Soul
Contributed by
lonelywolf04
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Saturday, 27th August 2011 @ 02:16:04 AM in AEST
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It is pitch black in the sun light,
And bright as day at night,
On a road I may never see,
Is a life lived so happily,
As the image some are shown,
Isnt always as they known,
A face wearing a frown,
Shows the words of a silent breakdown,
And as these thoughts circle in my mind,
I wonder what I may find,
As I travel down this hole,
To a funeral for my soul.
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lonelywolf04
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2011-08-27 02:16:04]
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Re: A Funeral for my Soul
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by emystar on
Saturday, 27th August 2011 @ 03:06:10 AM AEST
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Sad but great writing.
blessings,
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Re: A Funeral for my Soul
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by UNORTHODOX on
Saturday, 27th August 2011 @ 10:06:37 AM AEST
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Great artistic channeling
this piece is like a fine glass of wine
I felt every ion of your sentiment,
as this was so cleverly depicted
short, sweet, with enough impact
to inspire a choir of muses to create
truly well done
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Re: A Funeral for my Soul
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by FlintHunter on
Wednesday, 14th September 2011 @ 06:42:45 PM AEST
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This is a hard subject to write about and a hard poem to read -- yet it must be written and it must be read. Too many people 'travel doen this hole' -- and I think that many of them need not; but they don't see that. They see themselves as worthless -- when really they are worth everything. But how can you wake a person up? I don't know -- and I've been in the hole too. All I can say is that God will help you out -- but you must reach out your hand so He can take it... a very good poem -- see -- even out of deep pain, sometimes something beautiful may arise... and it did.
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