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kick the can
Contributed by
poeticjestix
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Sunday, 28th August 2011 @ 05:55:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Crushed up can with twisted logo
would not stand if hit by pogo
sign embossed to offer bliss
twisted shortly after kiss.
placed upon a shelf so grand
compared with the other brands
be it price, or strength of taste
it was chosen with great haste
once dispensed it lost it's charm
started cold, but ended warm
span around then clutched with force
dropped then kicked to run it's course.
sponsors name is at the kerb
crunchy creases warp the blurb
not quite what they had in mind
morning after brushed,
all fine.
Copyright ©
poeticjestix
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2011-08-28 17:55:33]
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Re: kick the can
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by dee on
Monday, 29th August 2011 @ 08:00:20 AM AEST
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