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THE POET
Contributed by
angelabella
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Monday, 29th August 2011 @ 03:17:38 AM in AEST
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A bleeding pen.
A withered hand.
On a sheet stained with
blood from her heart
Emotions spilled along the pages.
A kiss...A smile,
A tear cut across the lines
A harmony in her soul.
Words that rhyme with her dreams
But never rhymes with reality
She seems to read the story within every face
But within a face is her story
Her pen bleeds for a soul
She yearns for Understanding
But in a soul...
She sees nothing but a blank
Criticism and Judgment; the worst
She writes not for a praise
But for the inner burning passion
And simply for a smile...
She might meet another stony face
Yet she knows within that face...
Is another story.
Copyright ©
angelabella
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2011-08-29 03:17:38]
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Re: THE POET
(User Rating: 1 )
by marsh on
Thursday, 1st September 2011 @ 06:19:57 AM AEST
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| Captures a poet's dilemma and the desire to communicate feelings which cant be resisted.A poem is written because it must. -marsh |
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Re: THE POET
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by FlintHunter on
Monday, 5th September 2011 @ 05:35:42 PM AEST
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dear angelabella,
This is a spectacular poem -- i am so glad you found me -- since now i have found you. you are in a class by yourself. This poem has tone, feeling, sadness, even bitterness -- not to worry about me: i will NEVER ever say mean words or 'criticize' a person's work. It's not my way, and it is wrong. So anyway -- this is a real poem. Be proud. Please. -----------FlintHunter |
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