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I Try So Hard
Contributed by
pixistix
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Monday, 29th August 2011 @ 09:18:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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I try so hard to move on.
I deleted you from everything.
But I will never,
delete you from my heart.
I try so hard
to pretend I don't know you.
And when I hear your name,
I try so hard not to recognize it.
I try so hard to forget you
and move on
like I don't love you
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pixistix
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2011-08-29 09:18:08]
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Re: I Try So Hard
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by FlintHunter on
Wednesday, 14th September 2011 @ 06:34:34 PM AEST
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It's sad to hear that you are so hurt by the one you love; I can't give you any advice about that. But I can say that you wrote a darned good poem -- even tho' it had to come out of a broken heart -- and, I would guess, some tears too. Whatever happens you will see -- in the end -- that God has done right by you... You will be happy again.
--FlintHunter
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