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The Storm
Contributed by
ginsdance
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Saturday, 3rd August 2002 @ 02:52:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The thunder rolls
Lightening pierces the sky,
And with every blow that falls
I accept that Im going to die.
Rain pounding,
Hail falling outside,
The distant rolling thunder
Is just a reminder of my fright.
He is Yelling, Screaming,
So many bruises,
And if I live over this tonight
In the morning there will just be excuses.
His dinner wasnt cooked just right,
I didnt look at him the right way,
All I know is Im dying inside,
A little more with each passing day.
The storm rages on,
And so does his temper,
And Im in the floor
All I can do is just whimper.
Seeing the hate flash through
The crystal ice of his eyes,
That the kindest words in public,
To me, it cant disguise.
Terrified so much now, I cant even scream,
Watch as the lightening strikes
Then suddenly Im lifted
Up towards the light.
Being held and comforted Ill be alright
The thunder has stopped here and so have my tears
Am I dreaming?
I could stay here for years!
And then I wake up,
Lying again on the living room floor,
Ive made it through another night without dying
And as the thunder rages outside, I cant remember what Im even living for.
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Re: The Storm
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by spaceotter on
Saturday, 3rd August 2002 @ 02:57:45 PM AEST
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Ow! Very, Very strong piece. I loved it. I hope your doing well.
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Re: The Storm
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by chatabox on
Sunday, 4th August 2002 @ 01:12:57 AM AEST
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yes it was a dream and your dreams are a challenge to you, a path to your future and that future is worthwhile. You have come this far, dont turn back now.
Wonderful write my dear. |
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Re: The Storm
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by markymark on
Sunday, 4th August 2002 @ 04:36:50 AM AEST
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| Excellent well written piece on to sad a reality...i do hope your sun comes out soon, you deserve warmth not storms...take care...Mark xx |
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Re: The Storm
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by Thumbsucker on
Sunday, 4th August 2002 @ 08:58:13 AM AEST
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Hiya Gin,
excellent, Excellent, EXCELLENT, powerful poem Gin. Your poems flow so effortlessly. I really like the flow of your work...must be the musical side of you.
I hope reliving your nightmare helps ease your pain. No one deserves this.....EVER.
Take care. Thumb |
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