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Why I Admired You
Contributed by
Deidra_Carmichael
on
Friday, 2nd September 2011 @ 07:43:58 AM in AEST
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Why I admired you
Should I really explain why Iadmired you
Believe me it doesnt seem possible does it?
Well let shall I tell of how you
Caughtmy eye at first
You seemed unique; set apart; in other words holy
But let a couple years pass by and bam that Exquisite work of God has vanished In thin air
You are lost and misled
But who am I to confront you about this?
Everyday the same I seeWasting away life
All for temporary joy oi vey
Signore, Filio bello
Why are you running away from True Love
I hope you return andwill forever stay
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Deidra_Carmichael
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2011-09-02 07:43:58]
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Re: Why I Admired You
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by UNORTHODOX on
Friday, 2nd September 2011 @ 10:13:58 AM AEST
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The reason this write is so powerful
is because it could apply to any one of us
it really grabs you by the throat
along with your personal touch the message
is an inspiration of sorts
well written
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