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the lovers
Contributed by
aulakh
on
Monday, 5th September 2011 @ 06:30:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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the lovers
Do not Look Down upon
A Broken Heart lover
He Has been Hunter of Dynasty
Do not abuse the clouds
get away without raining
Sea Denied them for Drops of water
Never mind If air
pour dust in to your eyes
She is minding her own business
Wandering in endless Search
Clog in the way of stream
is not acceptable
Water in hurry to suicide
and finish Separation with ocean
Luminous moon is not at fault
How he can give milky rays of light
If Clouds grabbed Sky
Why broken Heart lover guilty
If he had lose his Sense
a fairy got away to take his heart .
BY: JATINDER AULAKH
Copyright ©
aulakh
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2011-09-05 18:30:34]
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Re: the lovers
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by emystar on
Monday, 5th September 2011 @ 06:50:01 PM AEST
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Awesome.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: the lovers
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by LandsleyAlexandre on
Monday, 5th September 2011 @ 06:56:07 PM AEST
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| Interesting and cool poem!!!! keep going |
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Re: the lovers
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by FlintHunter on
Monday, 5th September 2011 @ 07:26:26 PM AEST
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A lovely and very interesting poem. I like how each stanza starts and ends. Good writing. Write more!
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Re: the lovers
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by deusdeira on
Tuesday, 6th September 2011 @ 03:26:18 PM AEST
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| the grammar is a bit off :) but a lovely poem nonetheless. |
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