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Old man's blood pressure soaring
Contributed by
thezenmonkey
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Tuesday, 13th September 2011 @ 05:01:18 PM in AEST
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Its raining its pouring
the old man is snoring
some youth passing by
dicide to kick old mans door in.
Still sleeping and snoring
he's dreaming he's soaring
it seems old man snoring was caught unawares,
as youth quietly scuttle up and down stairs.
The rains stoped its morning
old man wakes up yarwning
and finds he has nothing left
up nor down stairs.
The old man complaining
his blood pressure straining
calmly explaining to policemen,
who could not care less.
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thezenmonkey
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2011-09-13 17:01:18]
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Re: Old man's blood pressure soaring
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by Deidra_Carmichael on
Tuesday, 13th September 2011 @ 05:19:31 PM AEST
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Witty- very humorous! I enjoyed this read very much. Fortunately, laughing extends longevity and comedy is always welcome in poetry. Take care and God bless,
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