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Cant You see It?
Contributed by
pollyamik
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Friday, 16th September 2011 @ 06:22:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
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When I said I was hurt you checked for bruises, when I said I'm crying you looked for tears. And when I said I am all alone, you looked around the room, looking back at me you whispered, "your tears are dry no bruises show and this room is filled with people.." As my eyes started to water and I whispered back,- you looked a little confused. When i said, -"How can you be so blind.. My eyes are dry the tears are inside.. My bruises don't show? Look deeper and you will see the blood flow.. And this room may be full but my heart is empty.. " You looked back, again confused, you took my hand and and with that you said," I don't understand but I promise it will be ok I'm here with you let my mend your wounds and dry your tears, let me fill your heart and calm your fears. " I looked you in the eyes and a little shaky, and whispered "thank you." And I fell into your arms as you whispered "I love you.".
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Re: Cant You see It?
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by Deidra_Carmichael on
Saturday, 17th September 2011 @ 04:51:56 AM AEST
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Oh what a beautiful life-lesson and love story! It is so true that one must look beyond the facade of a weary soul. Take care and God bless,
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