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always loved you...
Contributed by
pollyamik
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Monday, 19th September 2011 @ 07:34:51 PM in AEST
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LoveRemembered
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I like walking in the rain,
And talking long showers,
And talking to you for hours and hours,
But I dont like when youre gone,
When youre away,
When I dont know if youre ok,
Are you ok?
Why are you away?
Are you coming back?
Or are you gone to stay?
Come back we'll start anew,
Love me like I have always loved you.
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Re: always loved you...
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by emystar on
Monday, 19th September 2011 @ 10:08:39 PM AEST
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Good writing.
blessings,
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Re: always loved you...
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by ammar on
Tuesday, 20th September 2011 @ 09:35:48 AM AEST
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Not a bad attempt for a first write. Enjoyed reading this one.
Keep writing
Peace
Ammar |
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