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Silent Beauty
Contributed by
SaxophoneJones
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Thursday, 22nd September 2011 @ 10:11:59 PM in AEST
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In beautiful peace
Her crimson lips pale and cold
She fades into dust
Copyright ©
SaxophoneJones
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2011-09-22 22:11:59]
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Re: Silent Beauty
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by emystar on
Thursday, 22nd September 2011 @ 11:02:41 PM AEST
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You are very good with these.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Silent Beauty
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by deusdeira on
Friday, 23rd September 2011 @ 03:08:31 AM AEST
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| This is beautiful. It reminds me a lot of the poem i just wrote "Invisible beauty." this poem makes me think of death and the loss you feel. It is very beautiful, and also... very sad. |
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Re: Silent Beauty
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by FlintHunter on
Friday, 23rd September 2011 @ 06:16:46 AM AEST
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Silent Beauty is a poem that makes you gasp -- had that effect on me, anyhow... The form usually suggests pastoral; this time we get Truth -- Bitter Truth. Brave Honesty. Dark Irony. Unforeseen Paradox: well done.
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Re: Silent Beauty
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by Lide on
Friday, 30th September 2011 @ 12:12:24 PM AEST
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| Three simple lines of beauty and that is what makes such a poem easy to remember. IT has a lot meaning. |
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Re: Silent Beauty
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd October 2011 @ 05:31:52 AM AEST
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| even though this is short - it's right to the point. i really liked it. it's beautiful. you have talent. |
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Re: Silent Beauty
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by KROLLER on
Tuesday, 4th October 2011 @ 10:11:05 PM AEST
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| beautiful.you said everything that had to be said.you told a complete story.wow! |
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