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Awe. Lol.
Contributed by
ShaeShorty
on
Sunday, 25th September 2011 @ 12:01:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I had fun with you, no matter what we did.
I enjoyed every minute, and hope it happens again.
When we went swimming, it felt so right.
Justfeeling how, you held me so tight.
I've never felt, the way I do
It only happens, when I'm around you.
When we fell asleep, holding each other.
I dreamed that we, would be together.
My dream didn't come true, and that's a shame.
Because without you, I'm not the same.
I fell in love, with you so fast.
Wishing we, could ignore the past.
But it's up to you, I'm not gonna beg.
So I'll just wait, and wait all day.
I just wish, I could be loved
By someone Iknow who will treat me good.
You make me weak, you make me cry.
But I don't care, I'll be alright.
I had a blast, when you were here
I wish you knew, how much I care.
I cared so much, about you babe
That now I can't, go too bed.
I cry myself, to sleep at night
And stay up late, and watch the sky.
The stars are out, and so bright
I want you here, right now tonight.
Copyright ©
ShaeShorty
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2011-09-25 00:01:55]
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Re: Awe. Lol.
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by ninety_three on
Sunday, 25th September 2011 @ 01:55:46 AM AEST
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| Beautiful poem. I loved the final stanza in particular - the rhyme worked perfectly. I know how you feel! |
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Re: Awe. Lol.
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by deusdeira on
Sunday, 25th September 2011 @ 04:38:47 AM AEST
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| This is a wonderful feeling. I wish that love was always shared, but unfortunately that is not the case. Regardless, never stop loving :P you will find the right person. |
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