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Hidden Love
Contributed by
aliopterix
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Wednesday, 28th September 2011 @ 11:11:47 PM in AEST
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Hidden Love
My head explodes with piercing pain
The only thing that keeps me sane
For you are far away from here
I beg you please respond my dear
And cast away the shadows and the rain
For all the hours that were apart
My soul is wrenched as is my heart
I wonder do you feel the same
And which of us you truly blame
For our sad trysts that we did start
Forever hiding in the dark
Returning home before the lark
Why cant we show the world we love
Each other more than God above
I tell you now I must embark
I need to be there by your side
So please dear me do not deride
For I am dark I need your light
To wrest me from this awful plight
I cannot be alone Ive tried
My case is packed Ill soon be there
Be ready dear and be aware
No more hiding no more lies
Im telling all the big surprise
For now my love I truly dare
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aliopterix
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Re: Hidden Love
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by emystar on
Thursday, 29th September 2011 @ 01:08:35 AM AEST
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Great write. Thought u said u was rusty.
Heck I almost said come on the door's un locked.
Good work.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: Hidden Love
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by mvvenkataraman on
Thursday, 29th September 2011 @ 09:53:20 AM AEST
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Dear respected aliopterix,
Carefully chosen words
Given as a poetic feast
Really highly impressive,
Words are short to pat
Please entertain us
Through such poems
That stand as examples
Regarding poem writing.
With best wishes, Thanking you, Yours truly,
mvvenkataraman
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Re: Hidden Love
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by Butterflyperfect on
Thursday, 29th September 2011 @ 10:07:32 AM AEST
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Very nice read for me. Exceptional write. Thanks for sharing!
:) Brenda |
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Re: Hidden Love
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by Sirath on
Thursday, 29th September 2011 @ 11:33:44 AM AEST
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| Good stuff! |
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