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Brave Knight 66
Contributed by
ramfire
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Friday, 30th September 2011 @ 08:42:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Give me your sweet lips Guenevere and Ill
not care what fate brings me hence evermore.
To be with you, dear Guenevere, awhile
is high bliss my heart beats out ever oer.
Come, Guenevere, let both our spirits soar
and youll lack nothing spending days with me.
Give me your sweet lips Guenevere once more
and Ill not care what fate brings me to see,
if whether my small lifes ship veers luff way or lee.
Now me thinks I hear trumpet blow of feast
and, Guenevere, thou needst to place self close
to Katharine, but maid do know not least
that I am standing watching ye with rose.
Tis flower ye didst give to me with those
who rode that night beneath portcullis gate.
Our hopes and dreams do live beyond this pose
of game and show for we esteem its fate.
that rules our given lives which we are free to take.
Copyright ©
ramfire
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2011-09-30 08:42:28]
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Re: Brave Knight 66
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Monday, 25th June 2012 @ 02:32:28 PM AEST
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A most interesting Rhyming scheme. I would like toknow if a Sestet is not supposed to be preceeded by an Octave. . So they say. I am rather intrigued by the extraordinary scheme of nine lines.
Good and interesting job, - I seem not to know sufficiently how these forms work.Thanks for sharing
Blessings
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