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Man or Angel?
Contributed by
pixiegreen69
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Saturday, 1st October 2011 @ 01:24:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Who could love a mind so twisted?
A mind so strayed from the norm - so misted.
Its a lot to ask of a man to love
a mind that does not conform.
Can you babysit?
Can you tolerate?
The medicines are wrong.
Can you stay that long?
Can you put her to bed
when shes had too much?
Can you please make sure
that doesnt happen and such?
Can you handle her
when her fears are real?
When she sees the ghosts?
Thats part of the deal.
Can you speak so soft
and have a touch thats gentle?
Will you stay so calm
when shes a little mental?
Its a lot to ask
this much is true.
Youre out there somewhere.
I am waiting for you.
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pixiegreen69
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2011-10-01 13:24:56]
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Re: Man or Angel?
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by FlintHunter on
Sunday, 2nd October 2011 @ 05:44:31 PM AEST
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I think 'Man or Angel?' is a very tender and sweet poem. Most of us -- poets, artists, and so on -- don't conform to the norm -- and neither do we want to! What a bore! Appreciate your difference! Of course you will find your love -- but look in the non-conforming spheres: there's where your special person waits... Great poem. A treasure. (I think one must necessarily be a non-conformist to write so expressively!)
--FlintHunter
Contributed by pixiegreen69 on Saturday, October 01 2011 @ 13:24:56 AEST
Topic: Emotional Poetry
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